I Am Loaded with Passive Skills - Chapter 1898
[End of the book]
Although some people will definitely say that it is boring, it is more enjoyable to read. And with the experience of the previous three volumes, I was able to avoid most of the pitfalls, and it was also very simple to write.
But this is equivalent to the advanced version of the Ancient Swordsman version of the Tiansang Linggong battle. So I won’t enter my comfort zone for now. After all, this is the first book, so I have to try something new and experience more setbacks.
So I killed most of them and only picked a few important ancient swordsmen to fight.
Because there were so many important things, many people waiting in line at the back didn’t get a turn and didn’t get to endure the beatings. It was such a pity.
Apart from the main characters, more emphasis is placed on Dao Qiongcang, who was said to be “unpredictable, nothing more than that” in the Void Island volume, and was said to be too supermodel after the night battle in Qingyuan Mountain. His reputation improved after he made friends in the Ruins of the Gods, but he was disliked again when he restored his original nature at the end of the volume. This was exactly the reason why Dao Qiongcang was disliked by everyone after the battle of the Ten Thrones. He was considered to have established himself.
I personally like Ai Cangsheng very much. No matter its principles or its character, it is exactly the feeling I imagined before I opened the book, with a heart of a tiger and swift and resolute actions. Even when I finished writing it, the feeling was still the same, with a heart of a tiger and a nose for roses. It can be said that it has stood the test of time.
The other members of the Ten Lords have basically gained a firm foothold and are no longer rootless duckweed. No one knows what they are trying to achieve. Each of them has a very different personality and their own paranoia. When they make their move in the final chapter, they will go all out.
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The Relics of God chapter is considered the pre-chapter of the final volume. It introduces many things and perfects many of the vague settings in the early stages, such as the Ten Ancestors, the Ancestral Tree and other lofty things.
But overall, it appears to be a bit gray. I summarized it and it has something to do with the environment. The sky is gray, giving people a gloomy feeling, throughout the whole article.
Although it failed in the end, only the second half of this article was enjoyable. The early layout seemed dragged out, especially the tug-of-war with the Moon Fox. I noticed it when I was writing, but there was no way to cut the Gordian knot. I’ll pay attention next time.
Although it is not perfect, at least the word “Ancestral God” has been established. If it is not good, it can be said to be dragged out, but if it is good, it can be said to be a long foreshadowing. So after that, even if the newly revived Sui Yin hits the wall in various ways, it does not seem weak after all this. On the contrary, I am looking forward to when He will explode, which gives me something else.
But there should be a better way to write it. The structure should not be so complicated. It somewhat imitates the Void Island but feels like it is trying to draw a tiger but ends up drawing a dog instead. It is trapped in its own box, which is not friendly to both the author and the readers, especially the readers who follow the book.
The truth is simple. If you are opening a new book, you have to think carefully about these words to avoid this pitfall.
Moving to Yujing and climbing the Holy Mountain are very simple in structure and very enjoyable. It is a kind of explosion after being suppressed for a long time. In fact, if it were not for filling the holes in the previous text and laying the lines for the later text, it would be even more brainless and enjoyable.
It has to be a good article!
The first volume of Sword Immortal should be written step by step, and it should be written like this throughout, making it exciting all the way to the first place, but this book does not allow it, and the purely exciting style is not suitable for this book, which can easily break the rhythm. Let’s forget it and consider it for the next book.
I went out to the Dead Sea to fight Ai Cangsheng. Speaking only of the fighting part, it was fun to fight, including the killing and extermination of souls. But when it came to the fun, I always felt that something was missing. I summarized it as follows: first, it did not meet expectations, and second, fighting a neutral character like Ai Cangsheng was far less enjoyable than fighting Dao Xuan Ji as Ai Cangsheng did.
It’s mediocre and unremarkable, it’s just a story of seizing the road, not a vendetta. Fortunately, it’s not a big explosion but a smooth ending. I know what it feels like. In the next book, I can add or subtract similar plots as appropriate. Once Ai Cangsheng is gone, there will be completely opposing opponents.
The final volume, let’s kill!
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Let’s talk about grades.
The goal at the end of the previous volume was to be able to break through from 6,000 average concentration to 7,000 average concentration after finishing this volume. Currently it is 7,300, so the goal has been achieved.
The last volume had over 4,000 words at the end of the follow-up reading, but this volume only has over 4,000 words in the climax, and the rest of the time fluctuates around 3,000 words.
But considering that it has more than seven million words, I am already feeling exhausted. I can only feel grateful that you are still able to keep reading.
It can’t be limited to this!
Comfort kills people!
The next volume is the final volume, it won’t be very long, and there is no need to suppress it for the sake of the sequel. After all, there is no sequel, everything can explode, all the lines are laid out at this moment, just to detonate – fuse, fireworks, it’s that simple.
The big scenes are done, the small scenes are passed over, and all the writing methods that should be tried have been tried. There is no need to experiment with complexity in the structure. I want the simplest approach, and I will make it as enjoyable as possible where it can be enjoyable.
After being passive for so long, I really need to attack!
I also set a small goal, 8,000 at the end.
In fact, even if this book of seven million words ends here, I would still consider it a success. After all, it is only Apple’s first book, and I have tried various writing methods, stepped on various landmines, and made various mistakes.
It can’t be limited to this!
Comfort kills people!
People are greedy, I want fame, who doesn’t want it, who doesn’t have ambition?
The real wish is just a daydream… The average subscription during the serialization period exceeded 10,000, but it is too difficult to get 10,000 subscriptions for a book with 8 million words. If it can be achieved, I will be a god soon.
Just kidding, I don’t have that big an appetite. For a book with 700 first orders, it would be pretty good if it can maintain 7,000 by the end of the book.
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