Martial Arts Master - Chapter 818

[Finish this testimonial]

I originally planned to talk about this ending first, but I didn’t know where to start, so I’d better say it where I thought of it.

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Martial arts, how should I put it, before I achieved the outer gang, I was always on the rise. I also had a good time writing it. No matter in daily life, feelings, fights, or characters, they all broke through the past, and there were laughter and curses. , Rough tea and light rice, all become the feeling of the article, especially the expression of emotions, it is somewhat unsullied, and the taste is natural.

Warm-blooded, warm, sweet, funny, fanciful, the taste of first love, pure mood, a little bit stronger than the previous expectations, all met the expectations in my heart.

But after the achievement of the outer gang, it began to become difficult. As I said in the previous leave application, it was impossible and impossible to change the style of painting. If you don’t focus on writing about the arena, writing this will become monotonous. tedious.

Before opening the book, I actually expected this situation. The default solution is to switch to group portraits to increase the suspense of victory and defeat, and to use missions in war-torn areas to dilute the sense of repetition.

However, it’s always good to think about it, and when the truth comes, I realize that I underestimated the problem.

Group portraits can solve this difficulty, but the problem is that there is no way to turn them around. There are two million words. If there is another character, it will be difficult for readers to be emotionally involved, because there is no common experience, no crying and laughing together.

Moreover, when I reach the outer gang, I can no longer make such a successful and powerful person full of blood, full of desire, like a young man, so although there is the temptation of title and the number one in the world, the inner driving force of the character is straight line slip.

Without this, the suspense of victory or defeat would not be able to evoke emotional ups and downs, and the ring match would be quite boring.

If you want to write group portraits, you must have motivation, desire, and goals to bring everyone together. Without this, it is just a mess of sand and no readability.

If you really want to write group portraits, you should come from the University Martial Arts Club from the beginning, and it will be hard to return afterward.

So, I cut a lot of arena competitions and speeded up the progress, but even so, the sixth part could not be launched. When I asked for leave last time, I decided to cut the mess quickly, otherwise the quality of the book would decline drastically.

Of course, the branches are gone, and the trunk has not changed. This ending itself is the intended ending, but it lacks a lot of foreshadowing, and many places are not round enough.

Well, as a person with full (mistaken) marks in Chinese reading comprehension, let me show you why it is said to be a predetermined ending.

Do you still remember Lou Chengda’s first ring match?

Little Wu Sheng!

From Xiaowusheng to Wusheng,

That is, the beginning and end of martial arts echo.

From the Yuanwang Hanfu Keke in Chapter 1, to the Hanfu for the wedding, it is the first and last echo of the feelings – this was actually added later, and the earliest reservation was as follows: Lou Cheng got the title of Wusheng, and Keke returned to China. At the exit, she saw the person waiting in the distance, just like Lou Chengyuan looked at her back then, and then she walked over and went home.

This kind of mood is better than today’s, but I was brainstorming at that time, and I set the final of the Wuji war in mid-July, and the time point can’t be deducted!

It can only be adjusted…

Fortunately, after a long scrutiny, the feeling of the flower market was not bad on the night of last year’s New Year.

Well, in terms of characters, due to the deletion of Jingwang and the arena competition, it failed to achieve the expected purpose later.

After I set up the three views, I sketched Loucheng and Keke a little bit. At first, they were young, ignorant, and careful contact. They were all very real and beautiful. , Keke went from being shy and submissive to breaking out and choosing to communicate. I think that was when she was alive, and her image stood up. The latter did not give up on herself. The two became better because of love, and they did not lose their souls. Independence means deepening.

I originally planned to use the exotic love after the start of the professional arena to show the encounters and small details of the two people, making the characters fuller and more flexible, such as Lou Cheng’s sense of abstinence, such as Keke’s seemingly weak The contrast between the face and the firm heart.

It’s a pity that Jingwang has lost a lot of foreshadowing, and the large reduction of the ring competition has also forced the daily life to be reduced, otherwise it will be top-heavy, and only a part of what I want to express is unsatisfactory.

Well, this is a beautiful story, a warm story, I hope it can bring back memories and bring unconscious smiles to everyone.

I mentioned the new book before Martial Arts, although this year there are two more ideas that I want to write and feel good, but they are not as strong as it, so let’s follow it step by step. Take your time and don’t rush.

The new book is probably in such a style, steampunk, Victorian sense, hidden mystery, self-struggle, with suspense revealing as a major feature, and some Cthulhu-like elements.

Well, I will make my own settings, just a part of the horror style is more like Cthulhu, so don’t expect to see this.

In short, the style of painting is a bit like the old universe in the first world. At that time, there was already the idea of this book. UU Reading www.sonicmtl.

com I also needs an original copy, so it’s a bit of a reflection unconsciously. Of course, the specifics have been greatly changed.

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It’s a different theme, a different feeling, and a new challenge. On April 1st next year, the mystery will open!

Uh, I have a long break this time, because there is a Chinese New Year in the middle. In addition, I have to save the manuscript for debt repayment. There are seven chapters, and there are many, many materials to read. I have to prepare well.

In the past four months, everyone is welcome to pay attention to my WeChat public account. After the book is finished, there will be a time to update it. I will look at the situation and have inspiration. Maybe I will write a little, and then I will share more interesting things with you every three weeks and five meetings. , such as the brain hole that I once had but no longer included in the writing plan.

Speaking of this, in fact, at first I had prepared martial arts extras, such as the setting of taboos, the injury of the master, the request promised by the Dragon King, and other countries facing the strong integration of China, because the style of painting is different from the text, so I plan to Treated as an extra.

But now, I have to recuperate my body, and I have filled up everything that should be filled, and the taste of revenge is almost gone, so let’s take a good rest.

Welcome to pay attention to my public number: uzei1985, and share your brain holes with you tomorrow and the day after tomorrow.