The Disciple's Diligence Makes the Master Seem Lazy - Chapter 312

[Afterwords, the new book has been opened!]

When I typed the ending, I felt so reluctant.

There are many characters in this book, and I typed them out by hand. It’s like living in that world. I don’t want them to end.

But the story has come to this point, and it’s time to end.

At the beginning, this book has two main lines, the stealer line and the daily line.

I originally planned to write these two lines at the same time, but the author was too young and his writing skills were not enough to control them.

In the story of Penglaijian, the stealer line ended hastily.

After this line ended, it came to the line of the heroine Daxu. When it was completely deciphered, the story of this book was over.

I made several fatal mistakes in the writing process.

The characters were portrayed too thinly.

Especially the fairy boy, I used a lot of strokes to write this person, but he was easily killed by the protagonist.

The second villain was not laid out before, and he appeared very abruptly.

Another fatal shortcoming is:

readers said they like to read daily life, and later I tended to write daily life. Writing too much daily life led to too slow plot advancement. It is easy to get aesthetic fatigue after reading too much daily life, and the follow-up reading is not strong.

In the final analysis, it is because I did not grasp the right balance.

I must learn from this lesson in the next book.

Fortunately, the completion of this book is still acceptable. The holes that need to be filled have been filled, and the things that need to be written have been written.

I will strive to write better in the next book.

Thank you brothers for your support! I

will finish the chapter and send flowers!

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(End of this chapter)