What To Do If The Heroine Escapes From The Book - Chapter 583

[postscript]

It’s over, it’s estimated to be about 1.5 million words, and the final 144.5?

It’s rare that the estimated word count is relatively accurate, and it used to be quite different… -_-!

(Speaking of which, I have never understood why many people love to ask how many words they plan to write in each book, which author’s plan is consistent with the actual situation, I may not know, what’s the use of asking ←_← especially what to ask early It’s time to finish the book, how do I know if it’s a mess, I don’t even know what time this chapter will be written that day)

Speaking of which, my body is really failing now, and I feel tired and stiff at the end of each book, exhausted both physically and mentally, as if my brains have been shot dry…

I have to go to exercise, and if I continue to do so, it will not be a matter of stopping and procrastinating. I am afraid that everyone will take pills.

Although it seems a little difficult to write at the end, this book is the happiest book I have ever written since I wrote the book. The content, background, characters, and getting along with each other are comfortable. Many parts are written very easily, and the nitpicking is also very good. No, the mental state is really comfortable.

The most disgusting report in the past has nothing to do with me, so I was in a good mood from the beginning to the end.

Especially in the first half, my wife often asks me “Why are you smiling while writing”… I think everyone should often see the mobile phone aunt laughing on the bed, this is the original intention of this book, and it has been achieved.

It is a great honor that this book can accompany you to spend a relaxing and pleasant time, shouting “Qiuqiu ~ my Qiuqiu”, cursing a few short words/short chickens, and closing the pages of the book under the warm sunset with a slight smile .

That’s enough.

In the later stage, in order to fill in the pits and write the changes after Chu Ge’s growth, there are more layouts and so on. The writing is a bit tiring, and it may not be as easy as the previous ones.

But I am still very happy to write, watching the growth of the characters and the feeling of filling in the holes, I feel a sense of accomplishment.

I always feel that being able to fill in all the pits and complete the whole story is the author’s greatest satisfaction.

As for the Chu Ge who became the Heavenly Dao and the mortal Chu Ge, some people think that people are separated, so here I recommend “Douluo Dalu 5”, the god king reincarnates and asks for blessings, absolutely the heart will not change, and there will be no separation at all.

Well, it must be emphasized again that Chu Ge is really not my own prototype. He and Zhang Qiren are a collection of various outstanding attributes of the profession of Internet writers. The only similarities between Chu Ge and me may be writing harem and There are two elements of resignation, and the others are far apart.

Why do I keep emphasizing that it’s not me, because the reading perspective is easily biased by this opening method, and I think it’s Ji Cha’s self-reporting, but it’s meaningless, it’s a professional essay, expressing an online writer The overall situation – especially the situation during the rush period.

It is a dream that the heroine came out. Under the background of being discriminated against on a blind date in reality, there is Yan Ruyu in the book. This layer of strong contrast is a pure dream and fairy tale for an author who hits the street. It is almost like a match seller. The little girl is almost…

This fairy tale is gradually completed in the process of the two falling in love, and the next “creation fairy tale” gradually becomes the theme.

Every book is a world, and the authors who hit the street are all creators. “It would be great if they come true.” Chu Ge said that this is his way. I think it should be 99% of the authors The dream in the heart.

If you really put your emotions into it, the characters in your pen will be alive.

It’s not that I like to write about creation (in fact, I should have avoided this theme, after all, the first two books were written about it), but if the author is the protagonist, he is indeed creating the world, which cannot be avoided and should not be avoided.

Chu Ge’s strength is not obtained through practice, and it is not a step-by-step upgrade, which may be a little lacking in reality… But taking “Creation” as an indicator, it means that the whole text is practicing, and the theme has always been closely linked.

In the end, both fairy tales were written out, which is the meaning of this book.

I am very satisfied.

As for hard practice and hard power, let’s slowly make up for it in the long time and autumn.

Some people said before that you can’t find the feeling of spring and autumn,

I can’t find the feeling of asking questions, of course, because this book is completely different from the previous ones, and I still feel the same as before. Is it about loneliness?

Originally, the feeling of the old work should not have anything to do with this… It’s a pity that my personal style is still relatively strong, and I can’t get rid of the relationship…

Actually, I didn’t know how to write about daily routines before…emotional dramas and daily routines are two different things. I used to focus on emotional dramas, but I had very little daily life.

As a result, the previous works have a feeling of “rushing the plot”, and there are few other fillers between the two events. For example, there are almost no life descriptions between the male and female protagonists.

And this book has given me a lot of rewards. Living at home, cooking and shopping can all be very good scenery.

Thank you all for enjoying these too, I had a great time writing them.

Then, I tried a major problem that the single heroine hopes to break through, and I also gained a good experience.

As we all know, I couldn’t control the number of heroines in the past… the unicorn arm was always uncontrollable.

When writing a female supporting role, it is natural to give some portrayals. The portrayals are cute but can’t help but add drama, and the result is ambiguous and has to be accepted.

In the past, I often said that this should be controlled within X, and that should be controlled within X. In the end, I didn’t realize it once, and there were more and more books.

The evil result of the expansion of the number is that it is impossible to allocate pen and ink in the later stage, and everyone can’t take care of it if they want to give the scene, which tends to be assimilated or facialized;

Forcibly trying to take care of both will lead to the plot being divided into pieces.

When I decided to try single women, my biggest expectation was to break through this point, and my biggest worry was that I couldn’t control it.

Fortunately, it was under control this time.

Mengmeng is very cute, Xuanji is very cute, Ruoyan Fei’er is actually pretty good too… But if you control your ambiguous heart, they are just passers-by. Since they have nothing to do with the protagonist, there is no need to consider whether they have a part in the role or whether they are charming or not. Hidden, the most troublesome problem is no longer a problem here.

There are many heroines in the next Honda, and I look forward to continuing this feeling, controlling some numbers, and allocating more pen and ink to the existing characterization and plot.

This is very important. It is probably the most concentrated point of my writing bottleneck for so many years. I hope that I can make progress in the next book.

I also hope that everyone will not “female lead +1” when they see a female character with a name. This is really a lose-lose situation.

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Having said so many good things, I also said some bad things. As a test field for the first time, this book will inevitably have shortcomings, and it is obvious.

I said a long time ago about the natural disadvantages of this type—everyday sweet articles are easy to get tired of, and it is easy for people to look at them but not pick them up, and the writing is not long.

This is not a question of the “single heroine” type, but a question of the detail of “daily love sweet articles”.

Under this category, the more representative authors are Sister Hua, Kiss the Pig, and a few others, and most of their works are completed with hundreds of thousands of words, and most of them are only a million.

Of course, it’s not impossible to be short, as others have written well.

However, although I have always been relatively short, I am not used to shortening it to less than one million. We must have 10cm instead of 5cm, right… Since I want to write, I wonder if I can stretch it to a relatively normal word count.

That is to add such as abilities and so on to connect the main line elements, and use various plots in and out of the book to expand and enrich the content.

But how should I put it… The ideal is full, but the actual operation is not right.

Because there is a sense of separation between the style of daily love stories and the style of supernatural combat, it is difficult to integrate the plain warmth with the ups and downs of tension or the sense of suspense.

Many people should feel this way. Once they enter the main story line and write about daily life, they will feel that the plain warmth they liked before will seem watery at this time, because it cuts the sense of expectation of the main line into pieces;

However, if the plot is followed closely, the daily warm tone that should be the main focus will be lost.

Therefore, we often encounter that when writing about daily life, some people feel that it is too watery to urge the plot, and when writing about the main story, some people think that “it doesn’t taste that good”. This kind of seesaw controversy lasted from dozens of chapters until the end of the book.

After consideration in the early stage, some scheduled urban battle plots were cut or reduced to ensure the tonality of daily sweet stories.

This also leads to a part of the split, that is, the story of Nanjiang is much simpler, and many settings such as the black house and many presets of Lin Wuyang are useless.

At the same time, it is also because there are many scruples about the urban background, and they dare not expand it blindly-so many people write about the city and put the background in Tokyo, which can indeed avoid a lot of trouble.

The urban ability can be brief, and at worst, you will be scolded a few words, but the plot in the book cannot be brief. There is no point in setting the frame.

So in the middle and later stages, the plot in the book began to be enlarged, and the urban background was moved to the whole world.

When the background of the battle is placed abroad, and the fantasy overshadows the urban reality, the bad things basically disappear.

Of course, it has also caused many readers to feel that the city has become fantasy… It is difficult to have both fish and bear’s paw.

Although I personally think that the plot in the book is well written, and the feedback is also good, but I must admit that the problem of separation still exists objectively.

Anyway, we can’t blame the objective factors entirely. It’s true that there is a lack of ability. The composition in my mind can’t be realized perfectly. The level is just like this… What’s more tragic is that the operation is as fierce as a tiger. The problem doesn’t seem to be resolved at all.

Scratch your head.

No wonder others would rather be short than add these things. If I still want to write this kind of writing in the future, I will write a sweet one with hundreds of thousands of words, which should be more comfortable.

There is another problem, which is a mistake caused by my past habits.

Qiuqiu shouldn’t have pushed it off so early.

Because if you don’t push it, there is still a natural sense of anticipation in the daily ambiguity, how to go further, how exciting, how to whet your appetite.

But once it is pushed, there will be no such expectations, and the appetite will not be lifted.

And the daily life of old couples is naturally mostly intimacy scenes, it can no longer be the blushing and heartbeat of the love period-and intimacy is often not regarded as daily life, it is classified in driving or even hydrology.

I bet there are quite a few people out there who get bored after pushing it because “it’s all about driving”.

This is a serious mistake caused by my long-term habit of “accepting girls simply” and “not hanging people”. Different types of works have different needs.

Well, there is not much to summarize.

Forgive the desire of an author who has experienced a major transformation for the first time to review the transformational works… In fact, these summaries are of little significance to readers. UU Reading www.www.SonicMTL.com These are things from the author’s perspective-of course, among the readers of this book , the proportion of authors is quite large…

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In short, although there are many problems, it is still a success in terms of the overall goal. I am already very satisfied that the first transformation can be written like this.

If any readers are dissatisfied, I would like to say sorry here, but my ability is really limited.

And the next book will be a story with a different feeling…Because the dream of the Great God’s appointment has been completed, I don’t have much demand for grades, and I have the urge to write something I like.

For example, martial arts, which I like very much and know that it is easy to fight to death… Of course, I haven’t thought about it now, I can only say that it is undecided, let’s see when the time comes, maybe it is even possible to challenge Western Fantasy… I can’t decide at this time .

The direction that can be expected is to reduce the proportion of heroines according to the above, and pay more attention to the plot and the portrayal of existing heroines, which will be the main direction of the next book.

Maybe it’s closer to the early stage of the question?

The way of thinking is like this, I don’t know if I can achieve what I want when I write it, just like this one that wants to combine supernatural powers but the coordination is not good, I don’t know what it will look like when the time comes, it may be super bad… …so don’t expect much.

I am old, my body is getting worse, and my mind is getting stiffer.

Although I have always been full of energy, I have been trying different themes and trying to break through my own bottlenecks, but now I really feel a little powerless, at least I don’t have the confidence that “I will definitely look better when I write this kind of subject matter” when I first wrote Ragnarok eight years ago. .

The opening time of the book may also be very late, at the end of this year at the earliest, next year at the latest… Rest for a while and exercise.

That’s all for now, see you guys…

[End of This Chapter.]